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Open Poetry #33

Guardian Spirit

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Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

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0 posted 2004-07-22 05:32 PM

Guardian Spirit

You’re with me now
within me now;
I wrap my wings
around you.
Stay, oh stay
and shelter here
within the umbra
of my caring;
know that you
are always mine,
and I am yours.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-07-22 05:54 PM

beautiful, Ed

M

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-07-22 06:04 PM

A beautiful guardian you're holding here...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

3 posted 2004-07-22 06:08 PM

Ed

"umbra"...what a beautiful word, and a loving poem!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2004-07-22 06:36 PM

The melding of two spirits... how utterly divine.

Love & Light,
Linda

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-07-22 11:12 PM

Now, that is what I call an EMBRACE! Beautiful.......jo

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

6 posted 2004-07-22 11:14 PM

You write with such tenderness. Appreciated more then you know. This is simply beautiful!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

7 posted 2004-07-25 02:35 AM

a guardian well equipped with a comforting heart... What a sweet, loving rendering!

misc'e

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

8 posted 2004-07-25 03:34 AM

good reminder that we all have one

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2004-07-29 03:12 PM

Sometimes, we equate softness with lack of strength... what a mistake that is...

This delicate embrace is a picture of power... and a knowledge of what's important. *S*

Superb write!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2004-07-29 03:14 PM

smiling...
Enjoyed this much....
very much.

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