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zenny
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since 2002-11-24
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0 posted 2004-07-22 04:36 PM


As a gift from the skies
you see it
falling
getting closer
nearing.. you
Amazed of it's
grace just floating in free air
you look..
just look
Look and feel the warmth
feel the path it has walked
'till the moment
you feel it's life
draining inside you
watering your skin
And know
at that moment
you're nothing more
then a simple flower
standing in the middle
of a green meadow
longing for a drop water

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1 posted 2004-07-22 04:38 PM


now this, I like
Kellie_Cantrell
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2 posted 2004-07-22 04:41 PM


I miss rain. Thank you for posting this. I recently moved to California. I have not seen a raindrop since. I used to live in Washington, I saw rain almost everyday. I really miss it and this touched my heart.

On sunday I am going to visit washington and I really hope it rains. I really miss the rain.


iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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3 posted 2004-07-22 04:59 PM


Oh, good write, zenny!
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2004-07-22 08:14 PM


Hi, Zenny! Your words were as delicate and delightful as a flower!

So pretty! So precious!

It's good to see a photo of you!


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5 posted 2004-07-23 09:23 PM


simply a flower
touching a cloud's heart
watch the rain

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