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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2004-07-22 01:57 PM

Crowds

So, he said,

“And I want…this…
That your laughter might draw
a crowd for miles around.”

~*~

She said,

“How so it is, then, that the smiles you bring
Are tinkle bell clear in sight’s sound ~
Can you hear a sight?”

Once, they would ponder,

“Only if laughter is
all one brings, with luscious love.”

                                    He laughed, then, in his chuckling way
                                                    That points, indeed, had been made,
                                                                      And his own little girl, laughed

Watching as the crowd gathered.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-07-22 02:00 PM

Smiling with you Soleil.
Very nicely done.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-07-22 02:09 PM

Soleil Noir
Enjoyed the subliminal.

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

3 posted 2004-07-22 02:27 PM

yes, enjoyed

...And I enjoy hearing a sight, and seeing a sound...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-07-22 02:42 PM

Very, very much enjoyed....and brought a smile to my face!

....jo

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-07-22 02:52 PM

lovely, very much enjoyed...

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2004-07-22 09:55 PM

very much enjoyed! I read this several times and each time my smile grew. Thanks!
misc'e

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2004-07-22 10:21 PM

I enjoyed the Kahlil Gibran feel to this write!

EA

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2004-07-23 09:45 AM

Solsan...

maiden in white
sahara
busy hemingway afternoon

perhaps a sip
of tea
see thru gown

enjoyed the movie here ms

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

9 posted 2004-07-23 11:04 AM

This just sparkles all over!

I read it a couple of times yesterday though I didn't take time to reply....and a couple of times this morning just to enjoy. I keep seeing little nuances in your wording and structure that -- well, they make it sparkle all over!

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