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Decaflame
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0 posted 2004-07-22 10:23 AM



Hope fringes

skip toward gleeeee

upon finger songs

trilling from soprano to guttering bass

and you,

you

would make tears

dwell back in the throat
rumbling purr
claws sheathed

after

but we, in sharing the knows, I, you, we,

this is how

and why

memories shine.



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1 posted 2004-07-22 10:27 AM


"Hope fringes

skip toward gleeeee

upon finger songs

trilling from soprano to guttering bass"

I liked this a lot

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-07-22 10:50 AM


"and you,

you

would make tears

dwell back in the throat
rumbling purr"

Oh yes Deca!!
Sensual write this hot muggy morn.
Love it!!  Love it!!  Love it!!

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2004-07-22 10:50 AM


"I, you, we"... My favourite kind of "scrambled eggs"!


EA

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-07-22 10:57 AM


Decaflame
I like mine with Ketchup. LOL enjoyed the read.

Martie
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5 posted 2004-07-22 12:44 PM


Deca

Yummy!

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-07-22 12:45 PM


enjoyed this
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2004-07-23 09:43 AM


dem eggs you got cookin?

seesm there is more cookin here
than just spam and cackleberries

kewl snackies ms

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8 posted 2004-07-23 10:04 AM


Yes, oh yes. Popping this pearl into my library! hugs, Chrislane

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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9 posted 2004-07-23 10:48 AM



"but we, in sharing the knows, I, you, we,

this is how

and why

memories shine."


Sometimes I think that no memory is real unless at least one other person shares it. I like the feel of this poem, serious underneath but with that childlike gleeee shining through everything!

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Patricia
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10 posted 2004-07-23 04:24 PM


Perfection, Deca.  Pure perfection!

Patricia

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11 posted 2004-07-23 04:38 PM


Thoroughly enjoyed reading about your "scrambled eggs!"   .....jo
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12 posted 2004-07-23 06:51 PM


Very interesting.  Enjoyed.

JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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