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whiskey
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0 posted 2004-07-22 09:37 AM



There you were
Glowing with happiness
As embracing In your arms
The beautiful new
Little bundle

I watched you grow
As into his eyes
You Stared lovingly
Taking in every movement
Yawn

How much difference
Nine months would make
To ones life
The moment eyes are set upon
That tiny face

I remembered that feeling
Not to long ago
When it was me in your position
Looking down into my little ones
Big eyes

I see the love you project
It makes me feel all warm
What a great mother you will be
Already are instantly
Maternal

I smile
I know
I see
You two




"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

© Copyright 2004 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-07-22 10:07 AM


A poem that this mother can truly appreciate.

~ and "I Smile"...


EA

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2 posted 2004-07-22 10:08 AM


enjoyed
SEA
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with you
3 posted 2004-07-22 10:25 AM


beautifully beautifully done
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-07-22 12:53 PM


precious
Enchantress
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5 posted 2004-07-22 12:54 PM


Smiling at this...
Beautiful Julie.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

iliana
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6 posted 2004-07-22 11:18 PM


I would smile, too -- lovely poem!
Susan
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7 posted 2004-07-23 02:15 AM


So sweet . . .

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Jes
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8 posted 2004-07-23 02:54 AM


When you look into a childs eyes you can see the glimt of love in them, whne you see the mother or father holding this litle new child you see that glimt in there eyes too.

I enjoyed and i did smile too.

Smile

Jes / Dreamer


JL
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9 posted 2004-07-23 04:29 PM


You spotlight your heart with these words.  Beautiful poetry!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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10 posted 2004-07-25 10:34 AM


so sweet and tender... i love this

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



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