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colly cone and slush |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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one of your friends you said mentioned I was a slut if a man can be and you said I could and another emailed you too and said I drank too much on some friday nights and maybe I was a sponge and you said maybe a lush so we agreed on slush instead and you were pleased as I described the condition of a simi melted not frozen lover that made you slide off the straight and narrow of your proper journey into the aybss of my arms where you thawed me just enough to make a drench of yourself and to soil your lady press you said I ruined you then and you could never go back to the place you had been and did I mind making you stay to do it all over again _____________ Dark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
can I do it again... and again? You are in prime form this morning Dark one... and I'm loving every minute of it! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I don't believe any of us go back to the place we were yesterday...but move forward, into a finer slush? Yes...smiles and hugs Look forward to reading you thank you for writing and sharing |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
GS...wink...sorry, thought it was still night, guess I must have lost my watch again..hehe thanks to you ___________ LeeJ ms, thanks to you, watch you step there..is a bit slippery (grin) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
of a simi melted not frozen lover that made you slide off the straight and narrow of your proper journey into the aybss of my arms where you thawed me just enough to make a drench of yourself and to soil your lady press ============================= that made you slide off the straight and narrow of your proper journey me thinks you would be just the one who could...  I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms JM..please accelerate and stomp the breaks at the same time...that is the only safe way off of this patch of road...(hehe...dare ya) Thanks lady friend |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it is always a pleasure to read where you take us... M |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
that lady has too many intrusive friends... she should listen to you more |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dark, I liked that slush word compromise. But that slide thingie? oooooh, a ride to remember.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
MS Naked..something about that name just nudes my replies...thanks to you ms ______________ Ms Deca, slip over here and slide onto my suggestions...mmmmmmm are you cold..I see you seem to have signs...(wink) thanks ms __________ ms Midnite...thanks for the read and the appreciation of the naughty gravity (grin) |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
Great write! very much enjoyed |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oy, slushy! Yum -hehehe. No, really, this was great. Enjoyed. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my yes... Can we do it again slushy one? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
those little big memories.....well said. |
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