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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-07-21 04:40 PM



Loves Me,  Loves Me Not

"Flowers whisper
what words never say"
a sign I passed while on the way.

I grasped for a pen
and paper to write
knowing the need, words holding tight.

Repeated it times
more than once, thinking back
to the last time received, those flowers I lack.

Though the blooms tend to wilt
long before comes their time
Still more do they say ...

than these words placed in rhyme~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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bslicker
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state of mind
1 posted 2004-07-21 05:06 PM




bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2004-07-21 05:13 PM


what a sweet surprise...thank you Bernie

M

JL
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3 posted 2004-07-21 06:42 PM


Bouquet of flowers
and evening showers
to keep them blooming
for you…

Someday you’ll find
a person so kind
who will whisper
those words never said…

Yep, I believe you will.


JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


GG
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Lost in thought
4 posted 2004-07-21 10:03 PM


seems sometimes nobody understands what we need...
and just how empty it can be without a sign, a note, proof.
Good to read you, I've missed having the chance to...

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

whiskey
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5 posted 2004-07-22 12:40 PM


What a lovely write, I like this alot.
Michelle_loves_Mike
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6 posted 2004-07-22 10:40 AM


Indeed, flowers given for the right reasons can say volumes,,,,and the words said last way past the wilting of the blooms,,,,however,,,flowers given for the wrong reasons,,,,well,,,cause the pain to remain in heart,,long after they have faded,,,

Michelle

To be held, is all I ask......

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2004-07-22 10:45 AM


M

Flowers

EA

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