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I Can"t
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I Can"t |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I can't I can't I can't be all the things you demand of me lover friend fool I can't I can't I can't be more than you expect from me mother student poet I can't I can't I can't be everything but who is "me" tired disheartened used I can't I can't I just can't |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Oh Paula!! If you only knew how close you came to how I am feeing right now. I love this. Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The title pulled me in... Very heartfelt.. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Good job on this one! Right to the point! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this  |
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