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Dreamer@
Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 38
Denmark

0 posted 2004-07-21 07:53 AM



When you see the rain that falls..
Or see the sun that shines..
The day is cut in lines.
So thats were the angels calls.

If you do not listen..
You will not hear..
It wont release the fear..
It will never be forgiven..

So stop up !!!

And listen.......... bloooob

Life is for mee to be !

© Copyright 2004 Jes Didrichsen - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-07-21 08:21 AM


Big smiles and hugs...a good one

One that I especially needed today

Now how did you know...(Wink)

Have a great day

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-07-21 12:45 PM


oh Jes...this is perfect!

what a neat write! Thanks for sharing...I needed this today

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2004-07-21 12:48 PM


Good one.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2004-07-21 04:24 PM


sometimes i think  i hear better when i dont strain to listen, but i do understand what you are saying
Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
5 posted 2004-07-21 07:07 PM


My son always said when he was little that the rain sounded like bacon sizzling. Some night stand and listen to the rain and close our eyes. It does have that sound.
Good One
BonBon

Jes
Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
6 posted 2004-07-22 05:49 PM


LeeJ

Im glad you liked it and im glad you got a smile too.

" Smile "


passing shadows

Well smile thanks Passing, and im glad you enjoyed it.

" Smile "

JL
Good one.

JL

Thansk JL and how does she know i look cute in the dark hehe, just kidding.

inkedgoddess

Yes i know exactly what you mean there too, but good we soemtimes know how to stop up for abit, and live the life we have.


Bonnie j

As i read ya comment Bonnie i could hear that bacon sizzling there, and i even could smell it.

I love when words does give a meaning like a imaginary picture a feeling, a smell, and even a touch.


Smile to ya all.

Sorry my old name in here but my explorer started me up on that but i have my own name again.

See ya soon

Smiles

Jes / Dreamer


Jes
Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
7 posted 2004-07-22 05:50 PM


Sorry i got a double click, and i cant delete it.
Angeltears
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since 2010-08-08
Posts 9

8 posted 2010-08-08 06:33 PM


Hi Dad

Nice one hugs Michelle

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