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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-07-21 07:16 AM


Of Impurity

Man is chaos, impurity
Born of an acts uncertainty
That is what I’m lead to believe
Findings of our latest conceive

It is a theory of the whole
They make no mention of a soul
And that will make a useless why
For time was born the same as I

If it began then it will end
And that’s the if we must contend
If that’s the path of evermore
Then eternity has a floor

Unless we speak of non exist
And that is a whole other twist
For in that none, we have the all
And that would be my theories call

So if you truly wish a soul
Than non exist should be your goal

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-07-21 07:53 AM


whewww, surely Sy, deep stuff for so early in the morning...and yet..as always
true blue exploration

Smiles...Good morning Sir,
wishing you a lovely day

Dreamer@
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2 posted 2004-07-21 08:04 AM


Hi Seymour

Long time since i have stepped by, but as always your poetry is great, this gave abit thoughts to think of.

Smiles and a good day

Jes / Dreamer

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2004-07-21 08:20 AM


Hmm! Now there's some food for thought! That puts a whole different spin on the phrase "to cease and desist"... Your philosophizing, sonneteering mind never stops! ~ and thank goodness for your readers!

Good morning, T-Man!

~ May you forever exist! ~ in one form or another!


EA

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4 posted 2004-07-21 08:24 AM



Good morning, Sy.  As I skipped along
your path of words this morning, it made
me think of some of the non-worthy news
I got to hear earlier...

and left me, of course, chuckling...

So I'm serving bagels...who's got the hot tea?

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2004-07-21 08:45 AM


LeeJ
No deeper than a finger dip. LOL Good morning.

Dreamer@
Nothing to worry about, glad to see you back.

Earth Angel
I'm sure I'll exist in one form or another.
LOL

Sunshine
Thank you, I'll be right there.

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2004-07-21 10:17 AM


It is a theory of the whole
They make no mention of a soul
And that will make a useless why
For time was born the same as I

===============================

Verses like this serve proof as to why you are our Poetic Prophet, our King of the Cadence Couplet... and Wizard of Wisdom.

and then there is that dandy dragon

*ww*

I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2004-07-21 11:32 AM


JM,
Glad you had time to stop by.
WWRS

iliana
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8 posted 2004-07-21 11:58 AM


Now, this is a marvel....for me to ponder!  *hugs* ....jo
passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-07-21 12:34 PM


those last lines...always power-packed
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-07-21 01:51 PM


iliana
A ponder wonder. LOL

passing,
Glad you liked.

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