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Seeing God Again
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Seeing God Again |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Dawn sneaks in, still timid, as a wandful of stars shine past the midnight curfew; i drift in the transition and let it pull me through as i can still only feel sky; i awaken to you you the dream, or you the reality? the heart overflows; love climbs like a vine, fenceless and free, asymmetrical without balance, butterflies and babys breath move the morning in silence, on winged feet, i piroutette weightless and giddy; i tumble through the unchartered, an athiest seeing god again; i brace myself; knowing i have fallen. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite Michele...very much enjoyed the read. Lovely lovely words here. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And never fear, for He shall catch you in your fall...Very well said. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done ma'am... a delicate turn of words amidst some harsher edges that we know are there to catch us.. when the fall breaks.. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Love it.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Well done and take him into your heart |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
WOW! Good luck! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great piece! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
************************ love climbs like a vine, fenceless and free, asymmetrical without balance, ******************************  the most beautifully balanced things on earth are often asymmetrical |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"love climbs like a vine, fenceless and free," ~ I could fill a book with memorable passages from your poetry!!! God is smiling at you! ~ and for what it's worth, so am I!  Love & God's Light, Linda |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I like this a lot, but then, the last time I saw god she was 5'10" and had red hair. so, what do I know? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sometimes the tumble is well worth the fall. I really loved this. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed the tumble...........hugs, jo |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I know how ya feel..I used to dream I'd died, was standing in line at the pearly gates...right behind Mother Teresea, and I heard God tell her..."You could have done more".....whatta nightmare....Like your write Blond Bombshell....well done |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I can just picture you twirling, M Me |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Dawn sneaks in, still timid, as a wandful of stars shine past the midnight curfew; I don't have the words to say what I think about this because the whole thing is outstanding. I mean that! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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