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Eastern Exposure |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I found myself naked in presence of one shivering inside, yet not from the cold rather these feelings I claimed long had died still linger with fingers that won't let me go I found myself feeling lost and exposed there was no shelter to cower and hide pangs of hunger from those days of old cripple my heart with the truth of my lies I found my tears sliding heat down my face a pain in my being that knows not a cure I beg clouds to cover my disgrace but I am exposed and so lost to obscure... ~tier |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah.. my friend this sounds painful.. well done.. but my regrets for the pain.. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love is cleaning up a sick parent/spouse who has just undergone kemo...awakened in the night vomiting...washing her/him off and still seeing beauty Love is convictions which solidify between two..from hard work, blistered hands, but the harvest is plentiful Love is a vetern of shock...aspiration, indifferences, dissappointment, trying to save an entire town Love is wounded family, speaking words of confidence...support...sommitment fo find answeres for them all, in silent allowance Love is giving much more then receiving...never giving up...support and instilling good health Love is Vitamin C.... Smiles and hugs This was a magnificant write..inspiring |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Captain, just a bit of reminscing here- that mingled with my freudian slip of earlier. *chuckling* Lee J, glad you could find some inspiration in these words. ~tier  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I found myself naked in presence of one shivering inside, yet not from the cold rather these feelings I claimed long had died still linger with fingers that won't let me go ~*~ One should never grow SO old... that they forget feelings such as this... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
lovely, softly written...and yes, painful |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sunshine, *hugs to you* thank you!! Muted, so sweet of you to say! thank you too! ~tier |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tier~ This is so lovely ..penned with the gentlest of strokes. Much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very emotional but good......  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I nodded through reading this |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So much depth in this poem. Well done. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very well done. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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