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A Deem
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A Deem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Deem I plucked a flower of a deem It had the odor of a dream It showered me with golden hue That fit into a sky of blue I brushed it by my nose and lips It warmed my very fingertips Gave my heart an extra pump And brought my throat an extra lump I set it like a mantles lace Near the radiance of her face Stared into the bluest eyes Brought her hand my lips and sighs Mouthed three words she knew quite well Those that would not break the spell Brought her close into my hold Close within my souls enfold And there it stays within my core A moment of forevermore |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I brushed it by my nose and lips It warmed my very fingertips Gave my heart an extra pump And brought my throat an extra lump I set it like a mantles lace Near the radiance of her face Stared into the bluest eyes Brought her hand my lips and sighs Mouthed three words she knew quite well Those that would not break the spell Brought her close into my hold Close within my souls enfold ============================ ahhhhh Sy-babes, I do so love when Randy writes romantic.This is such a lovely heart on sleeve piece...written by a gentleman's poet with a pen of tender humility. Makes a moth wish she had blue eyes  *L*Brought her hand my lips and sighs what a great line that is. *winkiewinkie*    I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, To me you have blue eyes. Got your note and will do my best in missing you. I'll write you back some time today. WWRS |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Fine write Sy....not sure I understand your reply above however?...Are you going to do your best in missing her?....That's kinda like saying, "How can I say I miss ya when I can't get ya to leave"..isn't it?...LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Just can't keep a secret with you around. LOL I thought you were in isolation? Thanks for the read buddy. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Master Sy..conviction to continue.....well deemed sir...well penned too |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mouthed three words she knew quite well Those that would not break the spell Brought her close into my hold Close within my souls enfold ~*~ You ol' romantic, you...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Sonneteer! May your path in life be strewn which such fantastical flowers! ~ and blue eyes! (Mine are aqua blue. Do they count?)   Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a beautiful romantic soul you have dear Sy! This one made me swoon, and so early in the morning too.  Lovely lovely verse this. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Awwww, big sigh, romantic guy... ~K~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ It just doesn't get much prettier than this~  'I set it like a mantles lace Near the radiance of her face Stared into the bluest eyes Brought her hand my lips and sighs Mouthed three words she knew quite well Those that would not break the spell Brought her close into my hold Close within my souls enfold And there it stays within my core A moment of forevermore' How very, very beautiful this inking of thought~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I set it like a mantles lace Near the radiance of her face Stared into the bluest eyes Brought her hand my lips and sighs it is by faith and faith alone wonderful write my friend...wishing you always and forever the best |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger And I thank you. Sunshine That's me. Earth Angel Absolutely, Nancy, You sweet thing. Kahlil You are a dove. Marge, You are a sweetheart. LeeJ I hope you do not jest, LOL |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Reading you in the morning, is good for the heart. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie And such a sweetheart. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, I accept the sigh and add an apple pie. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And there it shall stay, forevermore... Good afternoon Sir Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, "And there it shall stay, forevermore..." Thank you buddy. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 So sweet.........jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you dear. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Mouthed three words she knew quite well Those that would not break the spell Brought her close into my hold Close within my souls enfold So beautifully romantic! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you sweety. |
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