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MERCURY
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0 posted 2004-07-20 05:48 AM



I’m rocked by a whisper yet found in the hay,

I try to please my inner demons yet I don’t care what they say.

Enticed by my loneliness,

Repelled by my good deeds,

The troubles` of the world makes my heart bleed.

Scratching on the surface,

Digging in my heels,

Does anyone know how it feels?

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Ceinwyn
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1 posted 2004-07-20 08:40 AM


*nods* quite familiar....not a good thing now is it??

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-07-20 08:44 AM


I hearya! Yes, indeed I do!

May all the whispers that you hear, be joyful ones...


EA

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3 posted 2004-07-20 09:49 AM


ah.. those questions which we ask when it all seems madness..inside, and out..

nice piece.. I enjoyed

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-07-20 12:22 PM


sure
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5 posted 2004-07-20 01:49 PM


enjoyed this
and nodding yes

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2004-07-20 02:29 PM


definately nodding yes....
and definately understanding it....

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