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exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-07-20 03:11 AM


i may not always love you..

your hand caresses my cheek
to wipe away my tears

..but long as there are stars above you..

you say you were lost without me
my heart stops beating

you never need to doubt it..

i whisper nothing but love,
straight from my heart

..i'll make you so sure about it..

your my heart,my soul
my life.

god only knows what I'd be without you..

© Copyright 2004 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-07-20 03:39 AM


I loved this song.....and your sentimental poem..........jo
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-07-20 04:52 AM


well done!
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2004-07-21 03:12 AM


One of my favorites...fantastic...James
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-07-21 03:54 PM


So now THAT tune will be playing ALL day...

thanks, lady...

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2004-07-21 06:51 PM


Excellent!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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