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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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I am helplessly drawn to the warm secret scent of your neck, to the pulse of your throat, How smoothly your voice verbalizes my skin Your shoulders, solid and strong I hold on to them just to see how long I can refrain from trembling I place my thoughts to candle along shifting strength and dare The line, the lean line that trails south of your heartburst, the subtle trace of potency the way your breath struggles to palms as liquor to lips So distinct, the sound of straight want so dimensional, amber-aired, veined from the belly of a dragon’s lair with no one there but us |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Your shoulders, solid and strong I hold on to them just to see how long I can refrain from trembling Oooh, yes Regina! Passionate write. hugs, Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is so COOL! I love this! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
NOT cool. HOT! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rwood I'd be tickled pink to get a poem like that.  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
reg, I love holding this one up to the light. It is simply...exquisite... ~K~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
IWIHWT ! I couldn't even get away with trying to pass this off as my own to my boyfriend (not that an "angel" would ever do such a thing!!!) ~ but he'd know it wasn't written by me because there are no hearts and flowers and other sweetsie things in it! lol Sigh, that was so loverly!  EA |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
How smoothly your voice verbalizes my skin What a great line...lots of great lines. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
darn him..he gets all the nuzzle nookie and I just deliver the milk romantic with bacon grease ms...fine dine write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Your shoulders, solid and strong I hold on to them just to see how long I can refrain from trembling" Oh my gosh Regina.... This SIZZLES! I love it...more please? ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I place my thoughts to candle along shifting strength and dare The line, the lean line that trails south of your heartburst, the subtle trace of potency what a read and write...simply picturesque in it's own right... Very beautifully done |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
bravo ma'am... bravo |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Chris: Thanks Miss, for the hugs and the love of wordshares today, always. Saunni: Thanks sweet friend, for stopping in and the inspire. Sunnyone: Just a little? Big thank you grins. Sy: Would wallpaper your world if I could, but here's a little tickle for your pink  K: You are kind to look, to see, and to read me poetess...many thanks. EA: Awww...but I'm sure he adores your lady garden, so lovely. Hugs winged one. PK: Many thanks for finding them that way. D: Oh darn, I'm out of milk again! Could you please? Can't make passion gravy without it. Thanks Mr. MooMoo Man. Nancy: Okay, I'll try...how can I deny your sweet requests. So many thanks. LeeJ: Thanks for taking the time to glance around and see what you see dear lady. Much appreciation. Love, Reg |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful...no other word for it |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh this was yummy! Sensual, longing, stimulating. I likie very much. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I shall never ask you again how's life treating you  obviously it is treating you simply awesome! That was absolutely sensual without saying it out loud. Lovely. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
with no one there but us as it should be... darn Reg, so good to see such happiness in your word pen and  heart! |
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