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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2004-07-19 09:59 PM

I have no words to tell you
Fearful emotions tie my tongue
I can not even stammer a few
My speech has become undone.
I might write in bright crimson
Shedding my blood for you,
But you’ve already turned away
Gone because what I couldn’t say
Unable to tell what I need
I watch you now recede

Gloom

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-07-19 10:15 PM

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2004-07-19 10:26 PM

that brock my heart....

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-07-19 11:33 PM

Well expressed sadness........I think your Words do speak.

.....jo

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

4 posted 2004-07-20 12:28 PM

"I have no words to tell you
Fearful emotions tie my tongue
I can not even stammer a few
My speech has become undone"

I would think this would say enough. Gently powerful poem.

misc'e

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2004-07-20 09:42 AM

the pain and regret is written so well.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2004-07-20 09:51 AM

nicely written Gloom..

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-07-20 10:55 AM

its never to late...to tell her what you need to tell her...in that your relationship may flower, with time and patience...fear not...and if she doesn't understand then it's much better to know now then later...it closes old doors and opens new ones

A very lovely read...your astue feelings about this come through...it is so much easier when we are not emotionally connected. Oft times in a situation as such, I ask myself...what would I want?

Men are from Mars..women are from Venus, and open communication paints a romantic moon

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-07-20 12:14 PM

ouchie

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