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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2004-07-19 10:53 AM

I want to feel you
I want to know,
I want to love you,
Every day,
Every way,
You are whole life through,
No matter what?
I feel for you
Deeply,
So deeply for you
I know
You can't feel
But I can feel your love
I want to feel your touch,
Everything in you,
Your love that cares
I want to feel you
I want to feel your pain
Let the rain come down pouring
No matter how deep love gets
Involed
Still feel you,
Still love you
Still touch you
I want you to understand
The way I do,
for you
I want to feel your love,
for me
The way I do,
for you
I want to feel your love for me,
The way I do
The day is breaking through the sun,
The dawn to the mornings light
Night of giving love,
Let me feel you,
Your touch,
Deeply for me
I want to feel me.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-07-19 11:10 AM

your entire poem was the essense of wanton..to give, to receive and to explore the passion of two...

Lovely

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-07-19 11:24 AM

Nice thoughts and nice poetry.

JL

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-07-19 12:45 PM

very nice!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-07-19 12:48 PM

vandana
A good srong write, enjoyed.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2004-07-19 02:42 PM

very nice vandana. hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-07-19 02:44 PM

Ah, I know this ache.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2004-07-19 02:58 PM

Gosh, if I can feel you, he certainly must be able to ~ but on a MUCH deeper and closer level!!!

May he quench your yearning, burning thirst for his love! ~ and fast! You're sizzling! lol

EA

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-07-19 05:58 PM

Lovely write Vanadana..much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

9 posted 2004-07-19 08:25 PM

Very nice, I liked this alot

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2004-07-20 12:11 PM

Lovely...James

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