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tulip
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since 1999-07-04
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0 posted 2004-07-19 12:23 PM


A flash from my past.

A memory, that doesnt change.

A feeling of de ja vu.

Bitchiness, awake!

© Copyright 2004 tulip - All Rights Reserved
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2004-07-19 04:59 PM


Sounded so mellow… Well until I got to that last line.  Good one!

I hope, maybe…please??

Thanks for sharing.  

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-07-19 08:43 PM


Aha, that can happen, huh?  Made me smile.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-07-20 10:39 PM



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