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Beki
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0 posted 2004-07-18 08:12 PM



morning
his warm breath whispers
down my spine

© Copyright 2004 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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1 posted 2004-07-18 08:48 PM


Oy, short, but filled with tingles.

  Susan

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2 posted 2004-07-18 09:36 PM


Beki~

Tenderly
Inked sighs emit
Passionate breaths~

Love reading you, lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Kahlil
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3 posted 2004-07-18 10:09 PM


mm, nice and shivery...
~K~

Beki
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4 posted 2004-07-19 12:00 PM


thank you friends I do appreciate it, especially your awesome response, Marge!
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5 posted 2004-07-20 08:57 AM


Yum....the sweetest way to wake up!

You do much with few words -- I like that in a poet.

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Earth Angel
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6 posted 2004-07-20 09:01 AM


Me timbers just shivered!

Love & Light,
EA

LeeJ
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7 posted 2004-07-20 09:06 AM


how subtle yet sensual...lovely
Ceinwyn
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8 posted 2004-07-20 09:19 AM


always my fave way to wake up gets the morning to starting right!

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-07-20 12:40 PM



serenity blaze
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10 posted 2004-07-20 03:52 PM


No ma'am. You are certainly not the average poet.

And yes indeed, this is your forte'.


Beki
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11 posted 2004-07-21 02:51 AM


thanks everyone for all your generous comments - have not been writing much of late and am pleased you like this
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