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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-07-18 06:57 AM



Explicit

I could have
expressed myself
in a million ways
words dripping
softly from
my lips  
in aching
like something
in the rain
shivering wet
but sometimes
silence says
so much more


© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-07-18 09:27 AM


How very true Helen...well said..or not said.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2004-07-18 09:46 AM


You said it!
But you didn't have to )

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows
3 posted 2004-07-18 10:31 AM


The poem is excellent.  Silence however is a double edged blade.
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-07-18 11:48 AM


Yes, yes.  Enjoyed.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-07-18 12:50 PM


yep...and it suits you well, like it does me sometimes
iliana
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USA
6 posted 2004-07-18 02:46 PM


Yep -- sometimes it does.  Enjoyed........jo
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