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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-07-18 12:35 PM



Sentiment that conjures up sensations
Lifting lightly in the breeze
Weightless
Folds and gathers
Folds and gathers

Tugged, the anchor of your gaze
Turned transparent gauze
Against the glow of pause
Outlines
Float and Shadow
Float and Shadow

Draped in drams of softness
Curl and flutter
Cream and butter
A touch away
To skirt or sway

Copyright Kkh 7/18/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2004-07-18 12:47 PM


This reads like a summer breeze, and made my heart fly.

Lovely lovely, Lady~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-07-18 12:48 PM


Nice...James
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-07-18 01:31 AM


TD -- I feel like I was just brushed by lacey curtains swaying in a gentle breeze while sitting in a rocking chair, just remembering....... Lovely poem, here!   ......jo
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-07-18 09:32 AM


Lovely Kathleen,
As gentle as a summer breeze.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-07-18 12:00 PM


You made me smile with this delicate write.  Very nice.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
6 posted 2004-07-18 09:16 PM


floating on the coattails of the wind reading uplifting words
Magnus
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7 posted 2004-07-18 09:50 PM


Nice feelings from this K.  Well done...
such imagery...top shelf for sure.

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