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If Suzie's Not Around

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 07-18-2004 12:32 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

If Suzie's Not Around

Well now,
what am I going
to do if Suzie
doesn't love me.
If Suzie's (love)
isn't true.
Shipwrecked.
Run aground.
Breaking up.
Break down.
I'm going down
if Suzie's not around.
Am I weak.
Is she strong.
Am I right.
Is she wrong.
I'm breaking down
if Suzie's not
around.

JamesLee
July17
2004
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iliana
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since 12-05-2003
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1 posted 07-18-2004 01:34 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Oh, no, where's Suzie -- come on back, Suzie!  Seriously, hope everything is okay.
passing shadows
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2 posted 07-18-2004 03:26 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

you'll be fine
JamesMichael
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3 posted 07-18-2004 06:03 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you iliana and Passing Shadows for the nice responses...
Yes Passing Shadows I will be allright...it just doesn't seem like it right now...James
JamesMichael
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4 posted 02-03-2007 06:35 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Suzie's Still Around

Today, even though Suzie's far away,
everytime my heart pounds,
shes still around,
all around.
Though we're apart,
she's all over inside my heart,
She's still around,
everytime my heart pounds,
Suzie's still around...JamesLee 03February2007
Artic Wind
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5 posted 10-27-2007 05:48 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

yes, you will be very fine

ARCTIC WIND
 
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