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mrmojorisin5908
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0 posted 2004-07-17 08:53 PM



Prophets of an ancient century
Mutalating time as they reminice in thought
Mapping out a thousand thoughts
Lucid explanation of an irrelevent past

"How can the stars be so close,
Yet their light so far away"

Ears bleeding from the annointed one
Future is ever so present and raped by ruin
Adage is irrelevent by new technology
As it is, people oblivious to the apocolypse

"Earth is ruined by the carnivorous organism,
Wasted away and left for dead"

War is prevelant among the aristocrats
Irrelevent to the greed that lusts in their hearts
Death is a lunatic, ready to mock the innocent
Cry! WAKE UP! For now the Future is:

Decent
     Ending
          Abundant
                 diseased

Andrew A.
"The road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom." - William Blake

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miscellanea
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1 posted 2004-07-17 09:05 PM


Quite a post here!  Awaken.  It rings in my ears.
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iliana
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2 posted 2004-07-17 09:10 PM


"Ears bleeding from the annointed one
Future is ever so present and raped by ruin"

Very strong write!

Juju
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3 posted 2004-07-17 09:29 PM


I liked this one
-Juju

mrmojorisin5908
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4 posted 2004-07-29 10:44 AM


read it with eyes seeing the present

Andrew A.
"The road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom." - William Blake

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