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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-07-17 04:19 PM





Serenity’s Garden Party…

The sun shone bright and called to me
Whispering low, “Come; see Serenity,
A garden for poets and artists to eye,
Something that even may make you sigh.”



So I went to the compass for direction, and more,
And found some peace near heaven’s door.
I gazed at the benches and imagined the chatter
Of poets and friends, over various matters.



The Sun said, “Come, and stroll with me,
Just be quiet and see what you see…”
So can you imagine my child-like delight
To see the swallowtail come and alight…



With colors before me, my breath, it was taken ~
For too much stress leaves the body forsaken…
I’m glad I listened to sounds of the Sun
And thought of my poets, each, one by one…



And then Mr. Buckeye did the Cottoneyed Joe,
His partner then left, but he stayed on, so.
I winked at him and he posed for me,
And said, “Say Hi, to Serenity.”



Serenity surrounded me in whispered delight,
A garden she found, hence peace, this night;
And as for me, my poet friends…
Listen when Sun says, “Come here, round this bend….”


© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-07-17 04:23 PM


"So I went to the compass for direction, and more,
And found some peace near heaven’s door.
I gazed at the benches and imagined the chatter
Of poets and friends, over various matters."

Any idea how cool this is Kari...  


iliana
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2 posted 2004-07-17 04:23 PM


  Oh, Sunshine, you made my day with the lovely walk through the garden!   .......jo
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3 posted 2004-07-17 04:29 PM


Now how sweet is this?

I miss you all so much too, but they tell me that I've been yakking up a storm in my sleep. (uh oh?)

This is beautiful, Kari...

thank you


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4 posted 2004-07-17 04:37 PM


Thank you for this stroll of delight.
Love and hugs. Margherita

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5 posted 2004-07-17 04:37 PM


It's exactly how I picture Serenity's garden.
A place of peace and tranquility..
where we can gather together and converse.
Beautiful Karilea.
~Smiles & Hugs~

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2004-07-17 08:32 PM


Kari~

This is a visual and written wonder!  

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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7 posted 2004-07-17 08:55 PM


What a cool party with a bunch of neat people!  Beautifully written and illustrated, Sunshine.
                 miscellanea

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8 posted 2004-07-17 10:05 PM


Tis' beautiful I say !! The pics and your words. Hugs sweet lady. Chrislane

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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9 posted 2004-07-17 10:40 PM


Oh c'mon, Sunshine, quit whatever else you do in life and just take photos and write for us.  This is beautiful!  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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10 posted 2004-07-17 11:54 PM


thank you for that peaceful tour
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11 posted 2004-07-19 11:56 AM


so peaceful, I needed this today. Thank you.
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12 posted 2004-07-19 07:40 PM


As always..the tardy moth is late for the party....yaya

I read this the other day but lacked time to reply....its just gonna be this way until life settles down to a slow roar...
but I just wanted to let you know I walked in your garden and felt the warm of your sun and the peace of Serentiy.

Martie
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13 posted 2004-07-19 07:45 PM


Ahhhh, wonderful dear sis!  
Susan
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14 posted 2004-07-19 08:34 PM


A delightful stroll, thank you.

  Susan

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15 posted 2004-07-20 11:09 AM


You can almost hear the quiet laughter..
This is so good, and the pics really make it.

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16 posted 2004-07-23 12:57 PM


Lovely...James
Sunshine
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17 posted 2004-08-13 11:53 AM


Y'all make it much to easy to come play with you...thank you for reading, and for all you do!
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