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As If The Wind
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As If The Wind |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
From your lips... Words fall soft across my ears. You speak as if the wind. And I listen...swaying lost within your breeze. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"You speak as if the wind. And I listen...swaying lost within your breeze." Exquisite as always Eric!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Another for my collection of you -- beautiful.......jo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As long as you post these treasures here, you'll never be lost...but always found, with great pleasure... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And while you sway I skip in joy energized by your beauty that touches my heart and makes me dance upon never-ending waves of love. Enchanting, dear Eric! I love you. Margherita  |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice indeed, short but with so much beauty and love contained in those words "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
A moment's exquisite bliss, that is what your pen offers.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
To be that much at ease in the moment is truly magical. A lovely feeling to this. TD |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh this was very nice indeed! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
a king of romance! You wisp one away with perfect texture of sound, rhythym, and image. misc'e |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I'm crying. Beautiful *Allison* ~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes love is just that great |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thinking of my girlfriends beautiful voice now...James |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Always a pleasure, Eric... ~tier |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I find myself swaying in your poetic breeze!   Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this reminded me of a clandestine song which is specific to each and every soul's insignia...ahhhhh, the scent of Caribbean air... Good one |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your words are the epitome of love and romance and are always so very much enjoyed by this reader. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Sometimes I just sit back and take a poetry lesson from you, and it's very often a tiny one like this that teaches it best. The way you make completes out of. Fascinating! |
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