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Drooping Shadows
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Drooping Shadows My shadows droop in fond farewell Each outflow shows less bond of dwell Fading from a gray intense to Lighter shades of stray dispense They tweak my mind with weaker hues Less green and much more rues of blues So dark the holes, I cannot see Debris becomes a mystery I sweep the cobwebs of my thoughts The catch of life and what it caught But time has worn the facing dim And through the lacing slips the whim I patch the whole with fantasy A plug or two of ecstasy And argosy my ship of sleep This fresh of tide, upon the neap I see the curtains close embrace And nose upon the reapers face |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
what a fine crafting of words Gloom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor Gloom Thank you my friend. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May some sun shine bright your day... and life the shadows from your gray... ~*~ Hugging you, m'friend... and pouring some STRONG tea...    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Tea and sunshine, what could be better? |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You crafted this well and I can feel the shadows drooping. Much enjoyed.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Susan.  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I see the curtains close embrace And nose upon the reapers face" Yes, indeed! Something to ponder instead of being discouraged by droop. *grin* The message in your poetry is always carried comfortably by its delivery. That is a high level skill which I admire. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write today Sy! Much enjoyed! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...depressing... it looks good on you too |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox Thank you for the comp. Nancy, You can't beat excellent. passing, LOL WOW is good. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Thanks for the great my friend. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I think my shadows are beginning to droop a little, too -- finally.....lol! Another great! ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Oh no not you. LOL Thank you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You put so much thoughful into what you see, it makes me wish you would post one of your paintings. Your words are paint of a different kind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie I'd need a little help in doing that, I'm not to up on computers.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, no you don't! Pip's Sigh Guy is not going to see the grim nose of that Reaper creeper! Not if this "angel" can help it! Reaper be gone! Ring out bird song! Birdie chirps 'n kisses & lots of sunlight! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Profound Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you scorpio. |
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