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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-07-17 12:25 PM


And The Evening Turned To Bliss

I told her she was nice to look at,
because when I looked at her
she reminded me of every woman I ever admired.
I told her she was nice to hold,
because when I held her she felt
like she belonged in my arms.
I told her that I loved hearing her voice,
because everytime I heard her voice that
meant she was close to me, and I love
having her close to me.
I told her that her lips looked succulent,
like forbidden fruit wanting to be desired,
and yearning to be tasted.
She said there was nothing forbidden about
her lips, and in soft glow of candlelight
she offered me a kiss.
One led to another and another and
the evening turned to bliss.

JamesLee
July15
2004

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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-07-17 12:11 PM


Yes, so much bliss held within a kiss.

  susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-07-17 02:01 PM


So much said in one kiss James.
Very nice....

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-07-17 02:12 PM


Very, very nice, James!   ....jo
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

4 posted 2004-07-17 02:14 PM


Great write James!

Eric

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