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Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-07-16 10:33 PM

Where do I turn
Left here alone
Knowing now what I know?

What once was merely a breath
Has been caught on the wind
And now whispers in seductive tones.

Like the call of cascading water
Awash across stone
Swift and elusive, but still it is there

I hear the longing for answer
To discard the cover of silence
And put to voice what has been denied sound

I feel like crying out
Pleading from the rooftops
Can you not hear my soul yell?

But I am here
Left alone in the silence
Listening to its resonant roar

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2004-07-16 11:21 PM

What once was merely a breath
Has been caught on the wind
And now whispers in seductive tones.

Like the call of cascading water
Awash across stone
Swift and elusive, but still it is there

I hear the longing for answer
To discard the cover of silence
And put to voice what has been denied sound

==================================

this is a bittersweet beauty...
hauntingly lovely.

I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-07-16 11:28 PM

Oh, Susan, you do show us so much of you. this was a beautiful poem, full of emotion and longing.....very expressive.

....jo

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-07-16 11:36 PM

Perhaps too much, jo? Ah, but I am a soul that needs to be expressed. Though oft times I walk outside of my shoes, there is always a bit of ourselves in the imprints left, no? And at others, it is our hearts tread left for the reading. Thanks for your warm hearted acceptance, it means a great deal to me.

Janet Marie, thank you for your reply. I like your description, it definitely defines the mood.

Hugs to you both

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-07-17 12:27 PM

Enjoyed...James

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

5 posted 2004-07-17 12:35 PM

Such a plaintive voice echoing. Well done.

"May we one day look to the needs of those bleeding on our own streets before shedding blood on others." This is a great line you left on my Woman in White House. Thank you. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-07-17 01:13 AM

James -- Thank you.

Ken, I appreciate the reply and the compliment.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

7 posted 2004-07-17 03:08 AM

that silence... I can feel the ache within it. You express it so well in this.
misc'e

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

8 posted 2004-07-17 04:20 AM

I know the silence

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2004-07-17 11:20 AM

Thank you misc'e--

P.S., yes, I know that you do.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

10 posted 2004-07-17 02:26 PM

This so poignantly soft and beautiful.

Listen to the silennce...as melville said..."Silence is the only voice of God."

Love,
Eric

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2004-07-17 03:27 PM

Susan~
Oh my gawd ... this is LOVELY !!!
What delicate word-touch you put to the page~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

12 posted 2004-07-17 03:40 PM

stirs the senses with vivid and tactile imaging...and silence can be an horrendous roar, but oh, so lovely, when it finally tapers to a peaceful quietness

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

13 posted 2004-07-17 05:01 PM

But I am here
Left alone in the silence
Listening to its resonant roar

Beautifully said!
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2004-07-17 05:40 PM

Bittersweet write Susan...
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

15 posted 2004-07-17 06:55 PM

Like the call of cascading water
Awash across stone
Swift and elusive, but still it is there

~*~

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

16 posted 2004-07-17 07:54 PM

Thank you so much my dear friends. Your kindness warms me.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

17 posted 2004-07-17 08:25 PM

"I feel like crying out
Pleading from the rooftops
Can you not hear my soul yell?"

Very well done.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

18 posted 2004-07-17 08:46 PM

Thank you Susan C-

susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

19 posted 2004-07-18 09:54 AM

The white noise of alone. Perfectly expressed poetess. That's when we need new tunes...new vibes...to soothe us back into song.

Sincerely,
Reg

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

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My own little Icey Oblivion

20 posted 2004-07-18 11:12 AM

really enjoyed this

Victims....aren't we all?

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

21 posted 2004-07-18 11:31 AM

Reg, the white noise of alone, I like that. Nails it on the head. Thanks for your reply.

I'm happy you enjoyed this, oh snowy one.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

22 posted 2004-07-21 02:19 AM

Never too much, Susan, for your soul is beautiful.

....jo

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

23 posted 2004-07-21 02:59 AM

"Left alone in the silence
Listening to its resonant roar"

powerfulending...it resonates itself...good work

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

24 posted 2004-07-21 01:38 PM

"But I am here
Left alone in the silence
Listening to its resonant roar"

Been there too. This one hit home.
Great write.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

25 posted 2004-07-21 01:47 PM

sittin behind the pipes
of the black witch
with her loud cracked on

what roar are you hearing?

silence is a deaf maker sometimes huh

then sometimes it is a feather rubbing on cotton

dug the view here ms S

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

26 posted 2004-07-21 02:35 PM

Sometimes we long to speak, but are left only with the option of silence. It can be most difficult.

I appreciate so many understanding hearts.

Thank you

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

27 posted 2004-07-21 08:36 PM

Nicely written Susan, reminds me of dreams
where one is attempting to cry out and no
sound comes from their lips as they try to
get the attention of someone...

Silence is not always golden...

yv
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

28 posted 2004-07-21 09:25 PM

Simply put...beautiful as the poetess who wrote it. I thought it was meaningful, open, and quite simply, poetry. I hope to read more of your beautfiful words.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

29 posted 2004-07-21 10:39 PM

Barry, thank heavens silence can be broken when one is able to find their voice,

yv, thank you for your kind words, I do appreciate them.

Hugs to you both -- Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

30 posted 2004-07-21 11:07 PM

I think that I am actually running out of compliments to give you... That's a compliment right there! A beautiful piece.
*Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

31 posted 2004-07-22 01:46 AM

Excellently expressed ....I know that feel , awaiting in silence , yes me too

Hope

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

32 posted 2004-07-22 01:52 AM

This was elegant. I liked how it was written.
I think I will bookmark this piece. Good Poem

lgina
Member

since 2004-07-20

Posts 52

33 posted 2004-07-22 10:26 PM

I loved this one. It spoke right to my quiet place.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

34 posted 2004-07-23 01:42 AM

Thank you all so very much, your kind replies warm my heart.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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