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I'll be your Day Dream

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miscellanea
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0 posted 07-16-2004 01:52 PM       View Profile for miscellanea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for miscellanea

To him she wrote:

     "I値l be your daydream
     And you can be mine.

     If you bring wild flower memories
     I値l keep the black and white in line.

               We値l trod along the rolling hill
             Then spread the cloth of mine,
            Red and white checkered
              Fit for strategies of chess

               We値l talk of things
             Make no sense
              Worry of nothing
               Touch dimple dents
                As we smile within
              each other.

    So bring those wildflowers;
    I値l be your daydream
    And you can be mine."

  
       "I'll keep the black and white in line,
         my Sweets,  
        While you dream us into
         living color."
        
        Her words whispered within his touch  
        The Braille.  



                                



    
                  




[This message has been edited by miscellanea (07-17-2004 02:31 AM).]

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LeeJ
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smiles and hugs, very precious read.

  We値l trod along the rolling hill
             Then spread the cloth of mine,
            Red and white checkered
              Fit for strategies of chess


Very much enjoyed.

JL
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2 posted 07-16-2004 03:08 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

Simply beautiful poetry!  Great write.

JL
kayjay
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Nicely written!!  Welcome aboard, I look forward to more of your writing.  KJ

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4 posted 07-16-2004 08:16 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Very beautiful...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

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iliana
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5 posted 07-16-2004 11:24 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Very clever and lovely poetry, misc'e.  Enjoyed!     ....jo
Susan
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6 posted 07-16-2004 11:31 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

Simply lovely -- sigh.

Susan

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wow...

very pretty
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8 posted 07-19-2004 03:36 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

    So bring those wildflowers;
    I値l be your daydream
    And you can be mine."

  
       "I'll keep the black and white in line,
         my Sweets,  
        While you dream us into
         living color."
        
        Her words whispered within his touch  
        The Braille.  

I knew I was going to like this from the moment I saw the title... and I was right! *S* Excellent work!!!
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Love this! A keeper! hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Ceinwyn
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10 posted 07-19-2004 07:34 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn

definately a keeper..enjoyed

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This is Beautiful...... I love it  : )

~~ Connie ~~
 
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