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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-07-16 12:11 PM






~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Martie
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1 posted 2004-07-16 12:15 PM


Marge/sis

I needed this today...thank you!  

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-07-16 12:20 PM


Actually, I just flap my wings and fly over those ding-dang brick walls! lol

Loved this, Marge!!!!

Loveya,
EO

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3 posted 2004-07-16 12:34 PM


this is precious
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4 posted 2004-07-16 01:15 PM


Some of us are slow learners... and have the bloody heads to prove it! *G*

I like this very much! *S*

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5 posted 2004-07-16 01:17 PM


Loved this concept Margie!  wonderful....
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6 posted 2004-07-16 01:23 PM


hehehhehe, just adore your mind and heart


thank you for sharing.

Betty
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7 posted 2004-07-16 06:53 PM


I love the way you did this one.
Love ya,
Betty

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8 posted 2004-07-16 06:56 PM


Marge!  You are just SO creative!
Love how your mind works!
Excellent job here.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Susan
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9 posted 2004-07-16 07:26 PM


I absolutely adore this, its presentation, its message, its delivery.  Thanks for the great big smile!

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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10 posted 2004-07-17 06:53 AM


Every now and then we all put up brick walls.  I know I can't fly but it never occurred to me to just walk around it. Thanks for the insight Marge.

I love the wall.

Love Isobel ox


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11 posted 2004-07-17 02:19 PM


Wow...so creative and full of wisdom!

Eric

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12 posted 2004-07-17 02:49 PM


Dear Marge:

This is terrific!  Something we all need to remember!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2004-07-17 03:23 PM


Friends~
You folks are all so wonderful ... I have such fun playing with words and you let me know it's well worth the effort~
THANK YOU~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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14 posted 2004-07-17 03:25 PM


  Marge, you are my hero for today!  Loved this!   ....jo
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16 posted 2004-07-18 05:28 PM


Marge! This is very cute and quite original in theme!


Good message, too, dear lady!


Corinne

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17 posted 2004-07-18 11:59 PM


this is so fresh and original -- kudos Marge I love it!
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18 posted 2004-10-10 05:49 AM


Enjoyed the read sweetPoetFriend...
*~coco~*

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19 posted 2004-10-10 05:55 AM


This is lovely! enjoyed the read

Roniece Dawson-Bruce

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20 posted 2004-10-10 08:41 AM


Sometimes when we walk around
   we find the path past the next wall.

            ... and have a chance to smell a few roses!


              Really enjoyed this and glad Dixie gave it a "bump".

Marge Tindal
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Thank YOU for enjoying this little piece of me~

How wonderful to have our Ms CocoBaci perusing the back pages~
It's a treasure just knowing you are here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

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22 posted 2004-10-10 09:44 AM


Wow! This had slipped me by ... strange, as I too am a champion of the sort!

You have done this with such lovely creativity, obtaining a supereffect!

Enjoyed!
Nice that CocoBaci brought it up again.

Baci Baci
Margherita

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23 posted 2004-10-10 10:10 AM


LOL...cute!  
Here's something my mom gave me a while back:

AUTOBIOGRAPHY IN 5 SHORT CHAPTERS

1) I walk, down the street.
     There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
     I fall in.
     I am lost...I am hopeless.
          It isn't my fault.
     It takes forever to find a way out.

2) I walk down the same street.
     There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
     I pretend I don't see it.
     I fall in again.
   I can't believe I am in the same place.
          But, it isn't my fault.
   It still takes a long time to get out.

3) I walk down the same street.
     There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
     I see it is there.
     I still fall in...it's a habit.
          My eyes are open
          I know where I am.
     It is MY fault.
     I get out immediately.

4) I walk down the same street.
     There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
     I walk around it.

5) I walk down another street.

By Portia Nelson

Just read that again last night...how funny to read, this morning, what you wrote...

Take care Miss Margie!  hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

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24 posted 2004-10-10 10:43 AM


good one
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