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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
black waves whirl like bats surrounding my sand castle remember, and drown |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
are they good black waves or bad ones? I hope they're good ones, nothing like drowning in the depth of the sea...intoxicating! Besides, I'd hate for you to experience any bad ones...it's Friday and everyone should be happy! Hugs and smiles sent to ya |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Ouch. I hope this is just an image and not reality. Excellent imagery. This one will be rewinding in my head for a long time. The power behind that pen is as potent as the strength behind the washing waves. Take care, misc'e |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JaimeLove~ I know those tidal waved memories~ Poignant ... keeper~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie An emotional crash of words! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Even when your images are this stark, you weave a poignancy into them... This is excellent, my friend! And I wonder which is worse... drowning... or starving to death for lack of anything worth remembering. *S* |
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