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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-07-16 09:14 AM



En Code

Days that wind around each other
Sunshine winking its morn at me
Wildflowers reaching, a touch at hand
Skies opening, their blue to see.

Trapped inside, these feelings harbor
Releasing slowly, capsule timed
Quiet thoughts to mark my Friday
A gift of you, my moment's rhymed.

There's comfort in those eyes that visit
Traveling down this body's road
Behind the window, locked in memories
Stalling time in techno-code...

Not alone, with thoughts there, hidden
in between these lines bestowed.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-07-16 09:17 AM


smiles and hugs...this sounds so understanding and peaceful

I've learned to greatly appreciate the silence of peaceful moments...to me, it is a blessing and a gift given after a life time of wanton.

Lovely write my friend, have a wonderful and fulfilled weekend.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-07-16 09:26 AM


"Sunshine winking its morn at me
Wildflowers reaching, a touch at hand
Skies opening, their blue to see."

Yes..the sun is shining down on you M.
I'm praying for brighter days ahead for you.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-07-16 12:23 PM


MsWynter~
I've known these pensive times ... you write of them so well~
Love you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-07-16 12:24 PM


"Trapped inside, these feelings harbor
Releasing slowly, capsule timed"

~ So expressive...I do have an understanding of such feelings...

Loving hugs,
Linda

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2004-07-16 03:23 PM


As always, much depth in your poetry.  This is no exception and is a beautiful poem!

JL

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