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Childhood-Chapter 1
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Childhood-Chapter 1 |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY 
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This is a story of a girl, and how she came to be let me take you back, back to the begining her alcoholic father wasn't there to help her never-satisfied mother give birth november 23,1987, she was born on this earth their third child, second baby girl "Katrina Marie" was the name her uncle gave her her uncle lost all of his girl, must be a bad curse father spoiled her rotten, or so they say she ran and cried to daddy, they wouldn't give her - her way she runs alone with the boys, "Daddy's Favorite" never cared about sister, for she was the total oppisite sister was always cleaning for mommy, but she thought it was by choice Oh Boy! sister did something wrong, she can hear mommy screaming with an angry voice she hated when mommy was mad, "Mean Machine" is what she called her but mommy always wanted sister to stay home, guess thats who she prefered That one night she ran to wake daddy, uncle and cousin are fighting hurry daddy! already uncle is biting she loved her daddy, for he would always make thing better he would go to the ice cream shop, just for her, even in bad weather First day of school, Boy what a day! she bit teacher, and to her daddy she ran away Daddy told her to stay, finish school and make him proud, this she would do, without any fear or doubts WOOHOO PARTY! lets go daddy......she watched as he played boxing with the boys BAM! they got him right on his back, but she still loved him, even if daddy looked liked that it was a party, so they partied all night long she hugged daddy, he was so strong, looking at the special black dot on his chest WOW DADDY! we have the same mark, we must be the best that night they went home, "Whats wrong daddy?", She asked he looked so hurt, and slipped on the third step fast get up daddy, stop playing around, mommy looks so scared, why are you laying on the ground? the big van comes, its called an ambulance they say dont go with those men daddy, dont go, please stay but her daddy went, and they all followed, mommy, sister, and her brother stays with auntie, so he rode with her- their neighbor WOW SISTER! look at the building with all the lights they all went in, everyone, even auntie's and uncle's such a big, nice building, but everyone looks so scared and sad, somethings not right she had to go home, it was already late at night they left the building that daddy was supposed to be in, they got to the parking lot, there was where it just had to begin they said to come back up, to what they caleed a "waiting room" she wondered where her daddy was, would he be here soon? so up they went to the second floor, a place called "ICU" the doctor told her family something and mommy lost it, she didn't know what to do mommy ran to try to get to a room, but the man was blocking her, the man with a security suit uncle had to hold mommy back, after she threw that man to the floor mommy finally calmed down and everyone followed her, through the big wooden doors she followed too, and everyone filled the room, crowding around a bed she pushed her way through, and finally saw it, it was her daddy, the doctor said they did everything they could, but her daddy was dead she looked at him and wondered why the blood was leaking from his nose cousin wiped it off, with a little white cloth after that everything was a blurr, she wanted her daddy, but he wasn't there for her she would sleep with mommy, but mommy would never look her way mommy looks so sad, is it because she has daddy's face WOW! today must be special she thought, to put on her pretty dress, her and cousin fought she watched as mommy cried looking at a man in some kind of box, she got closer trying to see whats inside she finally reached mommy, and took a peek, what she saw was her daddy, I FOUND YOU DADDY! why did u have to hide?? but daddy didn't respond, so she thought it was a game, she was so happy, but they wouldn't let her go around and play the guys are taking daddy, wait daddy's playing a game with me she thinks, or maybe he's sleeping just let him stay what kinda game is daddy playing she thought, as her and mommy rode in the long black car, the one that daddy had brought but daddy's not driving, it's another man, she guessed daddy was playing that game again, now where could daddy be hiding?? the man finally stopped, at a place with a lot of flowers and dirt, they all got down, even mommy with her nice black skirt wow the boys are carrying the box daddy was hiding in, i guess thats the game, if i find him first, i win they all had a single rose, and a pretty ballon, they told her it was daddy's birthday today, she wonder's if she'll find him soon finally they opened the box, and sang a song, she peeked inside and found daddy, why is he still lying there? its been so long they close the box and put the flowers on top, she does the same, wait my daddy's in there! what is becoming of this game?? they start to lower the box, and release the ballons, NO! dont put the dirt on top of daddy he'll wake up soon its only a game! or so she thought, she wanted to get to her daddy, so against her cousin she fought why is everyone crying!? wheres daddy he'll make it all better, daddy always makes people happy, no matter what kind of weather they all begin to walk away, everyone is still crying though, she screamed and shout, her daddy's still in there under the dirt, please dont go but they all left her daddy, and they took her with them, what were they doing?? what did daddy do that now he is condemmed? they went home that night, the night her childhood hand to end, for they said daddy was gone, he was now up in heaven they told her to look at the stars, that he'll always be there for her, she looked at them with tears in her eyes, the pain she felt she wouldn't let go.....never everyone left and the night was done, this was the end of her childhood-chapter 1 I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very powerful. Eric |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This really held my attention. Waiting for the second chapter. |
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