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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-07-15 11:12 PM

To draw the updrafts into melody
Our hands entwine the ribbons of felicity
Sky bound, in yellow orbs of breath blown sound
So light, the feelings crowd inside expanding sight
As if to lift us from confusions rawhide strain
Up we go to hitchhike to another plane

And I would tie this ribbon round your heart
To let you float to sights remote where visions start
As certainly I too attend the rise implied
So light, these feelings full of hope inside
And giggling to tug your shoes from earth
I cling the slip of socks and shake the clouds in mirth

Yet could you still contain the noise, restrain with poise this smile?
Our chariot today, of basket woven hay, sightseeing promises in footloose style

Copyright Kkh 7/15/04

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2004-07-16 02:38 AM

What a wonderful feeling this poem gave as I read! I enjoyed the expressions and could hear the music softly playing as you touched the strings! Excellent....~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-07-16 03:13 AM

"And I would tie this ribbon round your heart
To let you float to sights remote where visions start
As certainly I too attend the rise implied
So light, these feelings full of hope inside
And giggling to tug your shoes from earth
I cling the slip of socks and shake the clouds in mirth"

*smile* This was wonderful!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-07-16 03:28 PM

Beautiful poetry! Enjoyed.

JL

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-07-17 12:05 PM

Ah, making me think of balooning, something I've always wanted to do.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-07-17 01:51 PM

very pretty write

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2004-07-17 02:14 PM

Beautiful!!!!

Eric

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