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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2004-07-15 05:08 PM


They're coming to take me away ha-ha!
They're coming to take me away,
Back to my crayons and coloring books,
That's how I pass my days.

With pills of light green and medium red,
They match my crayons so well,
Writing my poems in rainbow colors,
With always a story to tell.

I directed traffic once to often,
Said the white coated guys in the van,
"We're taking you from that intersection
Back to the house for mental correction,
The one we call "Happy Land"

The people here are nuts for sure,
I'm the only one that's fine,
I play their game and act insane,
Just laughing and doing my time.

Over there in the corner
Sit's Crazy LongJohn the sailor,
Next to him picking his rear
Is that poet named Balladeer

We're really not that crazy yanno,
In fact we're really just fine,
Compared to other nuts you've known
Like Lucie and Poet deVine.

And then think of yourself
Ya never quite know
Ya gotta be nuts
You're reading my poem...


© Copyright 2004 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2004-07-15 05:11 PM


LOL

Yes I did...

but then I always knew I was nuts.  

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

suthern
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2 posted 2004-07-15 05:13 PM


Toe??? Are you REALLY calling Lucie OLD??? LOL

What a great reminder of those fun times... and ... I'll always read. *S*

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
3 posted 2004-07-15 06:00 PM


ROTFWL! It's the ones who won't admit they're a little crazy, that I worry about!......Loved this! ....jo
miscellanea
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OH
4 posted 2004-07-15 06:57 PM


Am I nuts for reading your poem?   ROFL!
                   misc'e

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-07-15 07:02 PM




I'm nuts!!  I'm nuts! Where are my crayons???

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2004-07-15 07:06 PM


Toerag
I hate crayons.

Martie
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California
7 posted 2004-07-15 07:16 PM


Toe

I want the red crayon!  

Susan
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walking the surreal
8 posted 2004-07-15 07:22 PM


Big smile.  Mucho fun!  

  susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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state of confusion
9 posted 2004-07-15 08:11 PM


haha, well, they'll have to take a lot of us with you!


Corinne

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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10 posted 2004-07-16 06:59 AM


hehehhehhe, Toe, your a gem...

Hey I'd love to crayon with you, but mistakably ate all my crayolas?  Hey, they looked yummy? But must admit, they were a bit on the waxy side, I think, scented candles taste better...hehehehhee

Wonderful write!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
11 posted 2004-07-16 12:01 PM


I love nuts! They're kindred spirits! lol

Love from a fellow nut bar,
Candy Bar
Linda

passing shadows
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displaced
12 posted 2004-07-16 12:38 PM



Cpat Hair
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13 posted 2004-07-16 12:40 PM


lol... I knew I was nuts... and have been waiting for some time for them to come and take me away... now I'm worried if the rest of you are aleady there, it may not be as safe as I thought it would  
suthern
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Louisiana
14 posted 2004-07-16 12:55 PM


ummmm.... Toe??? *G*

Check out the candy EA is offering!!!!

ROFLMAO!!!

zenny
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Belgium
15 posted 2004-07-16 02:41 PM


i'm not nuts :p (i keep telling myself...), i just know u can give me a smile on my face
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