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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A whisper across my shoulder I don’t answer (though I hear) affecting sleep I stir, turning into her my hand finding fit in curve of waist fingers reach, slipping down soft angles one, then two, then another fingertips tracing hip I find her mouth warm in want and I, inspired... acquiescing to her desire tongue line lips as breath escapes sweet against my neck praying move me, I have no other wish |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*ahem* Very, very nice Dunc. Actually, very yummy. And sensual.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
wow !!! think i need some iced tea damn maybe 2 even |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
.....Ooooh dang!! Well you just moved me Dunc!  Excellent...softly sensual.... WOW! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Geez...it's hot in here today....... (enjoyed!) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yeah, Africa Hot! Sigh |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
now that's what I'm talking about....I wish my boyfriend made me feel like this again..the way your words did...shh that's our little secret If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What was the question?  |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
my my my *whew* Duncan.... I think I just swooned  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
 goob.... your starting to sound like some sort of sissy... I'll have to start tiptoeing around you like you was some sort of princess or something you keep writing like this... lmao |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Duncan "A whisper across my shoulder I don’t answer" Seems to me you answered very well! Psst, don't listen to Cpat Ron...just be yourself! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Try this on the cover of a romance novel!Who needs the illustration? misc'e |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Shakin' thangs up in here dear poet. You know I like the way this looks on you. Great lines and moves. Sincerely, Reg |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Considering all the intakes of breath and sighs going on, you've obviously written this very well. Okay, catching my breath now -- sigh . . . SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan You have no other wish? Neither do I. LOL |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
just wanted you to know this'un didn't move me it was just the chair that moved nice romantic moves, Dunc |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and I, inspired... acquiescing ================== OH..you aint neva lied SO, I guess you think the moth is gonna get all swoony over this, dont ya??? Well Im playing hard to get... lmao my hand finding fit in curve of waist fingers reach, slipping down soft angles one, then two, then another fingertips tracing hip NOPE not phased at all........  tongue line lips as breath escapes sweet against my neck NOPE, not that either............... I'm immune to such obvious poetic ploys. (heh) .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. SWOOOOOON* Duncan wrote a hottie poem... IM GIDDY!!!!!!!!!!! SEE>>>>>>>>>>>>  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
giddy up, little cowgirliemoth LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I find her mouth warm in want and I, inspired... acquiescing to her desire tongue line lips ======================== I bet you thought the moth missed those alliterations.... WRONG .... I told ya I was playing hard to get. lmao |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Summertime, and the living is easy...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Make a wish and dream as sweet as can be. I hope someday the one you want will come true for you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yeah goob... like Martie says.. just be yourself...lmao.. no wait don't do that! go ahead and write some more of this kind of stuff... it looks good on you.... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
beautiful! I love this one all over!! hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
JM told me your pillow needed to be replaced. Now I know why!!!! LOL Seriously, very sensual, and the line breaks ... well they are placed just perfect to add that pause when needed. Looks good, sounds good, so I say GOOD!! Enjoyed. |
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