navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Even In The Wind
Open Poetry #33
Post A Reply Post New Topic Even In The Wind Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
icebox
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2004-07-15 08:51 AM



the limbs of dead trees

hold still waiting for the sun

bringing memories

     ©2004 by icebox

© Copyright 2004 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-07-15 09:02 AM


icebox
Excellent haiku.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-07-15 09:11 AM


emptiness of arms
awaits warmth of tomorrow
memories in call


Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
3 posted 2004-07-15 09:49 AM


nice.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2004-07-15 09:52 AM


nice.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-07-15 10:07 AM


very good, enjoyed!
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
6 posted 2004-07-15 11:39 AM


icebox

One straight burnt trunk
Still finds the sky

A spirit’s walking stick

It casts a shadow
So do I  

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2004-07-15 12:24 PM


oh the memories
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
8 posted 2004-07-15 12:25 PM


Icebox, this will haunt me all day long.  *smile*
James_A_Fraser
Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines
9 posted 2004-07-16 09:36 AM


For me it's more like this...
/pip/Forum90/HTML/000443.html



~~J

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Even In The Wind

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary