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Ku'uipo
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0 posted 2004-07-14 08:44 PM



I know the mountain roar as I rest,
The seas mirror the moon,
And a child dreams,
I know the woman cries,
The man dies,
As I rest,
Rain falls and the sun shines,
Somewhere,
All is silent in the trees,
The city roars alert and alive,
As I rest,
Someone fight; Another falls,
They lie cold and alone,
Lovers love and hearts break,
All is broken and all is calm,
As I rest.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-07-14 09:22 PM


Life does go on, doesn't it....

this reminded me of an old song....

and I thank you for that.

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2 posted 2004-07-15 04:08 PM


I know the mountain roar as I rest,
The seas mirror the moon,
And a child dreams,

You captured my attention immediately... and I'm glad! *S* I like this very much! *S*

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