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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-07-14 06:11 PM



Sun is playing peek-a-boo
teasing that he won’t be so hot
but I know better, that’s for sure;
he’s hotter than he’s not.

©July 12, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-07-14 06:55 PM


Yes indeedy-bob, so very true.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2004-07-15 12:53 PM


Hotter than he's not!  Yep, that's telling it like it is.

But the summer time isn't long enough, and I wouldn't trade it for anything.  
Well that's not completely true, but it's close.  

Neat poem, VAS~

miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
3 posted 2004-07-15 01:58 AM


Vas,
  Cute as can be, perhaps, with a little underlying meaning?  Enjoyed it, and have the 45 Plus UVA/UVB/IR handy.
           misc'e

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