Beheaded Dandelions......repost

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Open Poetry #33

Beheaded Dandelions......repost

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-07-14 07:13 AM

Empty now, like gutted shells
minds and hearts,abstracted pieces,
on winds of fate,wishes blown
to souls unknown;

you've joined them in the flower fields
where birds swoop down from time to time
and feed upon their barren souls;

your tender words, i drank below
and seek a shred of resonance now,
to know that through this passing season,
your sonnets spoke of love with reason;

i shudder at your ugliness, for now i see you,
unpretty as weeds without illusions
as i often seem them,

to reaffirm my faith and poetic visions
i desperately need to find you
beautiful again.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-07-14 08:40 AM

I remember...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-07-14 08:44 AM

deeply expressed song

Well done...

Good Morning

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

3 posted 2004-07-14 09:23 AM

"to reaffirm my faith and poetic visions
i desperately need to find you
beautiful again."

Yes Exactly!

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-07-14 12:35 PM

eventually, I suppose

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-07-14 01:36 PM

OMG, Inkedgoddess.........you are the goddess of meadow write! Wonderful right and totally understand.......jo

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

6 posted 2004-07-15 07:14 AM

Beautiful ending! Nice

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