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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-07-13 04:13 PM



Sometimes...I am a thousand
miles away.

Wishing you were near.

Even as you stand
before me.

There are some distances that are
measured only by a touch.

Sometimes I am a thousand
miles away...

And only you can
reach me.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-07-13 04:19 PM


"There are some distances that are
measured only by a touch.

Sometimes I am a thousand
miles away...

And only you can
reach me."

So very beautiful Eric...always written to perfection.
Very much enjoyed this treasure.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

miscellanea
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OH
2 posted 2004-07-13 05:45 PM


Yes, always written to perfection!  

      misc.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-07-13 06:28 PM


Isn't esp a wonderful sense?
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-07-13 07:14 PM


Sometimes . . .  I know this.  Excellent as usual.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Kahlil
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5 posted 2004-07-13 07:28 PM


...and sometimes....the distant cannot be reached.
...but that wouldn't be you.

very nice write, Eric
~K~

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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6 posted 2004-07-13 09:42 PM


What a treasure trove to express.
TD

iliana
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7 posted 2004-07-13 10:01 PM


Isn't that the way it is.....sometimes.  So perfectly penned, Eric!  ......jo
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8 posted 2004-07-14 01:19 PM


Yes... I know this... *S*

And how beautifully you've written it!! *S*

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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9 posted 2004-07-14 03:20 PM


This is lovely, it almost has a haiku feel to it. Nicely done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
10 posted 2004-07-15 07:19 PM


Hello Eric

Once again your words speak to my heart.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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