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Open Poetry #33

Club Abindog

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-07-12 08:44 PM

Club Abindog (Guam)

Long black hair.
Silky black top.
Short black skirt.
Big black boots.

The girl in black
is singing songs to me.
That girl can sure
carry a melody.
Hard to take
my eyes from her.
Someday she'll sing
her songs in Vegas,
of that I'm sure.
But for now, she'll
sing for me in this
Filipino kareoke club.
Keep singing girl,
while I fall in love.

JamesLee
July12
2004
I'm back
in Hawaii.
Some might wonder what
abindog means.
I did, so I ask a waiter.
He said that abindog means
"the lust of a woman."
Was he telling me the truth
or putting me on?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-07-12 09:37 PM

Good stuff James....how was her voice though? Good?
Enjoyed this.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-07-12 11:16 PM

I can picture this--

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-07-13 06:19 AM

wonderful poem...

Only the waiter knows, but women lust after many things.....being motherly and tender, flowing with song for her family...and each joy she gives to her family, the one (s) she loves will supercede all other material wealth...it is a desire to be fruitful in life...a parental instinct. Yes? Smiles and hugs...welcome home

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-07-13 12:55 PM

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-01-09 08:57 PM

Thank you Enchantress, Susan, Lee J and passing shadows for the nice responses...here it is January 05 and I'm back in Guam for another trip...James

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