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Club Abindog

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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


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Club Abindog  (Guam)

Long black hair.
Silky black top.
Short black skirt.
Big black boots.

The girl in black
is singing songs to me.
That girl can sure
carry a melody.
Hard to take
my eyes from her.
Someday she'll sing
her songs in Vegas,
of that I'm sure.
But for now, she'll
sing for me in this
Filipino kareoke club.
Keep singing girl,
while I fall in love.

JamesLee
July12
2004
I'm back
in Hawaii.
Some might wonder what
abindog means.
I did, so I ask a waiter.
He said that abindog means
"the lust of a woman."
Was he telling me the truth
or putting me on?
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Enchantress
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since 08-14-2001
Posts 37801
Somewhere in time~


1 posted 07-12-2004 09:37 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Good stuff James....how was her voice though?  Good?
Enjoyed this.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Susan
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since 03-27-2004
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walking the surreal


2 posted 07-12-2004 11:16 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

I can picture this--

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

LeeJ
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since 06-19-2003
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SE PA


3 posted 07-13-2004 06:19 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

wonderful poem...

Only the waiter knows, but women lust after many things.....being motherly and tender, flowing with song for her family...and each joy she gives to her family, the one (s) she loves will supercede all other material wealth...it is a desire to be fruitful in life...a parental instinct.  Yes?  Smiles and hugs...welcome home
passing shadows
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JamesMichael
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5 posted 01-09-2005 08:57 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Enchantress, Susan, Lee J and passing shadows for the nice responses...here it is January 05 and I'm back in Guam for another trip...James
 
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