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kaile
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0 posted 2004-07-12 01:33 PM



spare me your mind change
furnish me with your wisdom
enlightenment grant

© Copyright 2004 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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of Depression
1 posted 2004-07-12 01:44 PM


Coins of thoughtfulness
Spent on flowers and rivers
Change with the seasons

Gloom

Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-07-12 02:53 PM


let thy inner truth
shine as a harbor beacon
enlightenment glows

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
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3 posted 2004-07-12 02:54 PM


Enjoyed both of these!
Nightshade
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just out of reach
4 posted 2004-07-12 03:32 PM


very smart write - enjoyed. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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Gaia
5 posted 2004-07-12 04:18 PM


i have no spare change
nor enlightenment to gift
simply, poetry


Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-07-12 04:25 PM


Excellent....and love the replies as well.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

INclan
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7 posted 2004-10-20 06:03 PM


Interesting....
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