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Kellsue
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0 posted 2004-07-12 11:25 AM



Aggravating Bond

Sitting, waiting
Toe tapping
Fingers snapping
Standing, pacing
Fidget, sigh, and fidget
Explain but you don’t hear
Try but you don’t notice
Talk but your oblivious
Show you but you are blind
Ask you but you speak of something else
Touch but you don’t feel
Blame myself, but why
Fidget, sigh, and fidget
Standing, pacing
Fingers snapping
Toe tapping
Sitting, waiting

For what exactly?


Thanks in advance for your thoughts!
Kelly


You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving
There is no danger of developing eye-strain from looking on the bright side of things

© Copyright 2004 Kelly S. McDonald - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-07-12 02:41 PM


this poem made me feel I was waiting for someone who was over an hour late already.

hehehhehehe

Good one

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-07-12 03:04 PM


Kellsue -- reminds me of waiting on a date when I was single and in love.......enjoyed and felt.......jo
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2004-07-12 06:33 PM


some never show up
other do
on their own time
not always yours

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