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bslicker
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0 posted 2004-07-11 09:06 PM



Holes

No One
Can See
Holes
Left Behind
Except
You
.
.
.
Bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

© Copyright 2004 Bernard Slicker - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-07-11 09:12 PM


Good one Bernie...a 10 or less.
Enjoyed!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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2 posted 2004-07-11 09:23 PM


I agree,  not too shabby for a 10 or less.
Good thoughts.

bslicker
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3 posted 2004-07-11 09:29 PM


Thanks Enchantress and Magnus,
This was my first attempt at a 10 or less.
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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4 posted 2004-07-11 10:19 PM


...unless the holes are in your pants!  
Good one Bernie!   hugs, Chris


   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

iliana
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5 posted 2004-07-12 12:03 PM


Good one, Bernie.  And, I can take it two different ways.....both good.  
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6 posted 2004-07-12 04:09 AM


*sigh*
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