Goddesses of Day and night

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Open Poetry #33

Goddesses of Day and night

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2004-07-11 02:33 PM

Lonely soul tainted with lust within his shell of sorrow
Which came with birth amongst this cruel world
His beauty swirled within ever-changing light
Two goddesses swooping for his affection through eternity
Caressing moon with her pale skin of romance
Brushed against the softened features of him
Spouting a rosebefore his very eyes
Beckoning him away from man created light
Into the coldness, chill of the cool night air of passing dreams.
The wildness that is of him surrounds his very essence
Mother earth once his homeland once more
No need for the feeble minded inventors of new ages
Held within the arms of twisting vine on his bed of soil
At peace falling asleep drinking from the bottle of desire
Wishing to stay with the goddess of night forever more
Goddess of light awaking his hatred once again
“Why oh why he cries do you torment me so
Let me stay within the night’s cold chill
For your heat whips at my skin draining me whole
Till I faintly crawl into your arms of rest”

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-07-11 02:39 PM

Outstanding in the imagery you have intertwined
within this poem. Certainly a powerful
write as he labors.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-07-11 04:23 PM

You have such a wondrously creative and vivid imagination which is perfectly illustrated through your poetry. This was a compelling read!

Good to read you again, Lee!