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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-07-11 01:03 PM



What is it,
This spark of envy
Of vying for hierarchy
Competitions quest?

Is it in the blood
A coursing rush of need
To stand aloft
To be the best?

And once you stand
Above all others
What then say you
In your loneliness?

I would rather
Seek connection
Interwoven intentions
A like minded quest

For within company
Our souls are nourished
Our hearts strengthened
We share our best

And here together
Standing side-by-side
We shall never be lost
In segregated loneliness

Will you walk with me?

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2004-07-11 01:06 PM


I would be honored to...     Very poignant observations with which I concur.

-MVS


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Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-07-11 01:13 PM


It would be an honour to walk with you ~ side by side, mind to mind, soul to soul!


Linda

Susan
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3 posted 2004-07-11 01:14 PM


And I honoured by both of your company -- thank you.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus
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4 posted 2004-07-11 01:37 PM


Susan, my tongue starves for a name.  I can
see the pedestal,  the lone king sitting
there....alone in his all mighty...the best
...yet so alone,  starving for the one thing
he does not have...friends...

Yes,  all of us would certainly walk with
you,  as a humble gesture.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2004-07-11 02:24 PM


Susan
Absolutely,

Susan
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6 posted 2004-07-11 03:43 PM


Ah, Barry and Sey, glad for your company.  What warmth a heart feels to be blessed with friends.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2004-07-11 06:48 PM


Susan~
It would be my sheer pleasure to walk hand in hand in friendship with you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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8 posted 2004-07-11 07:30 PM


I would be pleased to walk with you sweet lady.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Susan
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9 posted 2004-07-11 08:21 PM


Marge, Nancy Lee, as I with you.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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10 posted 2004-07-11 10:17 PM


Love this Susan. Might I take a walk with you and the others? Hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

iliana
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11 posted 2004-07-11 11:59 PM


This is so good, Susan.  I really like it (I like all your work!)!   ....jo
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12 posted 2004-07-12 04:10 AM


I already do
Susan
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13 posted 2004-07-12 10:19 AM


Chris, jo, P.S. glad for the company, the more the merrier!  Love you all.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Kellsue
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14 posted 2004-07-12 05:36 PM


I love this Susan!  I too wish to walk side by side with all here!

Kelly

You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving

Susan
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15 posted 2004-07-12 09:21 PM


Welcome Kelly, good to have you with us.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2004-07-13 08:26 PM


Lovely thoughts...James
Susan
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17 posted 2004-07-13 10:17 PM


Thank you James.  I think, however, I would like very much to walk with you as you live in Hawaii

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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