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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2004-07-11 12:32 PM



Hearts Becoming Silent

Why waste time writing
Of this endless despair
I will crawl into my shell
If you're no longer there

As the days pass on by
Having nothing penned
It then became obvious
Perhaps this is the end

Without your inspiration
I might as well be gone
Having lost what I need
How could I continue on

You left so much unsaid
Leaving me in the dark
Stunned by your silence
My writing lost the spark

Poems without endings
Are much like you and I
Hearts becoming silent
Neither saying goodbye

HopeĀ©2004

© Copyright 2004 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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1 posted 2004-07-11 12:34 PM



Hope-fully, a new source of inspiration will be coming into your life! ~ and the sooner the better because I enjoy your poetry!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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since 2002-09-29
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2 posted 2004-07-11 12:36 PM


Hope, things seem never to be final when there
is no goodbye said. They seem to just be left
hanging there.....never ended.
Hugs,
Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-07-11 12:53 PM


you know I know
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-07-11 03:50 PM


'tis hard, 'tis true, but your name inspires Hope anew -- the words will come, as will new inspiration.  Time truly is our friend.  Best to you --

  Susan  

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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5 posted 2004-07-12 12:09 PM


Hope, your writing has not lost its quality!  But, I think you need a *hug* -- so .......jo
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