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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2004-07-11 05:15 AM




sky flows pink to blue

trees black paper silhouettes

dawn on its own time

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-07-11 07:07 AM


*smiling*...that particular choice is one of the lesser evils in our day...kind of nice to just let it happen, isn't it, icebox?
Kahlil
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2 posted 2004-07-11 11:27 AM


amen to this!
I was just watching the sun dawning through the black trees when you posted...
~K~

garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-07-11 11:45 AM


That's the truth, Iceman. Something we
have no control over. Probably a good thing, too....
With all the different opinions of what a
day should be. LOL
Hugs,
Ethel

Susan
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-07-11 11:51 AM


wow, I can see this -- beautiful

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Martie
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5 posted 2004-07-11 03:48 PM


My favorite time of day, icebox....when all those birds wake up and give song to voice.  And there is no way to stop it, or make it last longer, no way to hold the night in.  Love imagery!  *hug*
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6 posted 2004-07-11 06:43 PM


IceBox~
Thank goodness you made the choice to write of it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Nan
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7 posted 2004-07-11 08:18 PM


Sunset yields to rise
Morrow's dewy morning blush
A new day's vision

Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
8 posted 2004-07-11 08:41 PM



hello said the Sun
stroking face in warm embrace
smiled in golden glow

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2004-07-11 08:48 PM



Pink is the sunrise
Rosy-tinted, petal-fresh
A new beginning.

iliana
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10 posted 2004-07-12 01:42 AM


Some beautiful things are set, but never have I seen a duplicate of the same sunrise or sunset.  Enjoyed the inspiration.  
passing shadows
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11 posted 2004-07-12 04:05 AM


but what if we did have the choice? *sigh*
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